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Xenk Yendar ([personal profile] partybabysitter) wrote in [community profile] undyingcourt 2023-12-29 05:38 pm (UTC)

[ Xenk really is proud of his work! He'd taken rigorous notes and put his effort into making it difficult -- even painful, as vampires often prefer the added experience of pain to the comfort found in simply human limits.

His face falls immediately at the score, brow furrowed and lips parting a moment before he remembers to steel that down.
]

I see.

[ Really the flash of emotion must seem comical, with how his shock is followed by frustration. With himself, mostly. He could have been better. Should have been better. Falling short is unacceptable. ]

How can I improve, for any future attempts?

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